I just want to wish you all a very Merry Christmas and happy holidays. I have enjoyed sharing your childrens' learning with you and hope you have enjoyed reading it too.
Farewell.
Miss Sutherland
The Writers' Window
In the weekend I watched Hot Chick and there was a name called April. It is my movie because I bought it with my own money. It was expensive. I got it because we bought it and we watched it. He went to the police car and got out and he went in a bush because he escaped. It was funny. He wasn’t in jail.
By Jake
My mum gave me a book. I like this book.
By Max
My brother sleeps all night. My brother is 9. How am I going to stop him coming into my bed? I know, I will use my stop sign I made because that will help.
By Codey
Once upon a time there was a fairy called Laura. She was a tidy fairy. The next day she went for a walk in the garden. She picked some roses. They were red. She did some rolly pollies down the hill. Then she went back to work. She had to do the dishes every day and the washing. She liked doing the dishes. After she watches tv she watches the cooking programme.
By Claudia
By Jake
My mum gave me a book. I like this book.
By Max
My brother sleeps all night. My brother is 9. How am I going to stop him coming into my bed? I know, I will use my stop sign I made because that will help.
By Codey
Once upon a time there was a fairy called Laura. She was a tidy fairy. The next day she went for a walk in the garden. She picked some roses. They were red. She did some rolly pollies down the hill. Then she went back to work. She had to do the dishes every day and the washing. She liked doing the dishes. After she watches tv she watches the cooking programme.
By Claudia
Practise the poem at home
Pizza
I love to eat pizza all
covered with cheese.
I love to eat pizza
any time I please.
Pizza with olives
and peppers too.
If you would like some,
I’ll share with you!
I love to eat pizza all
covered with cheese.
I love to eat pizza
any time I please.
Pizza with olives
and peppers too.
If you would like some,
I’ll share with you!
V is for visitor
Today Marc Ryan visited our classroom and showed us the medals he won at the Commonwealth Games and the Olympics. We think he is pretty awesome!
Holiday Happenings
Tell everyone about your holiday.
What did you do?
Who did you see?
Where did you go?
What did you do?
Who did you see?
Where did you go?
Writers' Window
We are learning to write recounts.
A recount has to
- have an opening sentence
- have 3 or more things in the order that they happened
- finish with how we felt
Savanna wrote….
Yesterday Talei came to our classroom to talk about her job. She works at Toyota. First she gave us some clues about where she works. Then we told her what we call our cars. I call my car Daisy. She liked what I call my car, so she gave me a hat. Next she gave Jake a blue car. Finally she finished. I liked what she gave me because it was for me.
Aria wrote...
Yesterday Talei came to room 17. She talked about her job. Silver is the most popular colour. Jake got to keep a blue toy car. Finally she was done. I liked it because we got to look at some car books.
Yesterday Talei came to our classroom to talk about her job. She works at Toyota. First she gave us some clues about where she works. Then we told her what we call our cars. I call my car Daisy. She liked what I call my car, so she gave me a hat. Next she gave Jake a blue car. Finally she finished. I liked what she gave me because it was for me.
Aria wrote...
Yesterday Talei came to room 17. She talked about her job. Silver is the most popular colour. Jake got to keep a blue toy car. Finally she was done. I liked it because we got to look at some car books.
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Way to go Pero!

Well done Pero!
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